Calm before beauty
Brains before a storm
Brick bare walls
With meaning deformed
Replaster, repair
An attempt to reform
But the beholder of beauty
Is in the eye of the storm
Short punchy poetry
Short punchy poetry
Calm before beauty
Brains before a storm
Brick bare walls
With meaning deformed
Replaster, repair
An attempt to reform
But the beholder of beauty
Is in the eye of the storm
Eight lines 
Ooh clever!
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Thanks, I think (unless this is in a sarcastic tone 🙂 ). Cheers for the feedback, appreciate it.
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No sarcasm! You’ve used overlapping words to connect two separate concepts, and then used the nature of one of the overlapping words to trap them irretrievably within each other. Extremely satisfying to read!
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Thank you so much. Great to hear and pleased you enjoyed it. Apologies for doubting you!
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